Welcome to Room 17's blog. This is a space where we share our thinking and learning. We do try and spell words correctly but this blog is a learning tool and if we get a word wrong it means we still need to learn it, which is a good thing.
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Tuesday, 18 July 2017
Welcome back to Term 3
Welcome back to Term 3! We hope you have had some time to rest and have fun with your family.
Today we will be writing about a highlight of your holiday BUT... we want to 'hook' our audience in.
What will be the beginning of your writing to 'hook' the reader in?
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i wed 5 bos and then ten tylerv .
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