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Tuesday 8 March 2016
Dominick's Super Writing
Dominick is the writer of the day. He wrote independently, found words on the writer's cards, used a full stop and remembered to record the sounds he heard in tricky words.
Dominick yosed punesawasin and infmasin to mace his storey intresting.he made it rally good to be the witir of the day. Esme (Dominick used punctuation and information to make his story interesting. He made it really good to be the writer of the day.)
Dominick yosed punesawasin and infmasin to mace his storey
ReplyDeleteintresting.he made it rally good to be the witir of the day. Esme
(Dominick used punctuation and information to make his story interesting. He made it really good to be the writer of the day.)
What a supportive class member to comment on Dominick's writing! Esme you are a bucket filler. :) Thank you
DeleteMrs Keogh
cool lucian
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